By Begin Again
Author Notes |
It's come to my attention that my original plan might have been flawed. Here are the new rules......
Are you one of those talented writers who can think on the spot and be creative practically on cue? Then this concept is for you!! Thanks to a FS friend who prefers to remain anonymous (my beating heart), I am able to promote this more, and I hope we will receive more readers and participants. In this Multi-Author book, anyone who's interested can write a chapter.(preferably under 500 words). Just PM me, and I'll give you what chapter number you'll be assigned to write! Before contributing your chapter, read what others have already written to help the story progress. You may join in as often as you like, but you must message for your chapter and wait your turn. This is so we don't want someone writing chapter two and discovering someone else has already posted it. I can't wait to see what we create with our combined varieties of talent!! |
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Two men, one on each side of Private Detective Ethan Cole, maintained a tight grip on his arms as they escorted him out of the club and into the cool night air where a limousine waited, the motor already running. Were they with the mysterious girl in red, or was she trying to warn him of their arrival? They shoved him into the vehicle.
A cream-colored American Bully dog lay stretched out across the back seat. “Fefe, you know better,” one of the men chastened. Fefe reluctantly plopped to the floor and stretched up onto her hind legs to look out the window. “The boss said you like car rides, but you have to stay off the seats.”
When settled between the two men, Ethan asked, “Which one of you Goombas is going to tell me what’s going on?”
“Shut it.” One man barked. “You’ll know soon enough.” The limo driver sped through the city and onto the highway. Ethan heard that voice before, when he worked on the Strawberry Shortcake caper. Twenty minutes later they pulled up to a country cottage. As soon as the limo door opened, Fefe scampered out and ran to the cottage front door.
“I can’t stand that mutt,” the familiar voice said as he pushed Ethan across the manicured lawn toward the cottage. Inside, they passed through a small living room to an equally lavish dining room where a woman sat at a table. She had a weathered face, etched with deep lines of resolve and conviction, while crow’s feet framed piercing eyes that penetrated the soul. Her mixed blonde and gray hair was trimmed into a man’s crew cut.
One of the goons said, “This is the boss, Mama George.”
“Sit,” she said, with Fefe on her lap. Ethan sat.
“You’re working for my daughter. She stole precious jewels from me. If you want to keep breathing, you’ll see that I get them back.”
“Sorry, Mama George. I don’t know your daughter.”
“That’s a lie. You were seen with her at the club. I want YOU to personally get those jewels from her or find out where they are and put them in my hands. Okay, boys. Take him back where you found him.”
Once back at the club, Ethan called the number the Lady in Red had scribbled on a napkin.
“My mother acquired those jewels during a recent heist. I didn’t take them. If you find them, I will pay twice your fee.”
Ethan had his work cut out for him.
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The story so far: Ethan Cole, P.I., has been joined at the table in his favorite nightclub by a gorgeous redhead he doesn’t know. As she tries to warn him of impending danger, the lights flicker, the redhead disappears – but does leave her phone number for Ethan on a napkin – and two thugs each grab Ethan by an arm and lead him outside to an awaiting limo.
They drive him to the isolated cottage of Mama George, who informs Ethan that the redhead he just met with is her daughter, who’s stolen precious jewels from Mama George. The woman demands that Ethan retrieve the jewels and return them to the cottage at once.
Later, back at the club, Ethan phones the gorgeous redhead and is told that not only does she not have the jewels, she wants them, herself. Then she advises Ethan that Mama George acquired the jewels during a heist and promises to pay Ethan twice whatever Mama George’s offer is.
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Ethan hung up the phone with Red and, like a hamster with a Brazil nut, returned to his table to mull this new crinkle over in his mind.
Mama George thought Red stole her jewels and was willing to pay handsomely to get them back. Red claimed she didn’t have them, either, and would pay double-y handsomely for their return.
Should he call Mama George and incite a bidding war? Or was Red figuring him for a patsy, and by doing that, he’d be playing right into her creamy, beautifully manicured hand?
He swilled down his whiskey and gave a nod to Sal at the bar for a refill.
Did any of this have to do with the knucklehead goon in the limo with the familiar-sounding voice that he remembered from the Strawberry Shortcake caper? That was a heist too, after all. But those jewels turned up finally under a farmhouse in Morocco. The owner of said house, though, did remain a mystery still to this day.
Gigi, the bleach-blonde waitress Ethan had enjoyed a couple of rolls in the hay with, bent down to deliver his whiskey and an ample view of her ample chest.
“Here, Doll,” she mewled, between snaps of her gum, and handed him a heavy black house phone with a cord long enough to snake around the entire dining room. “There’s a call for you.”
Ethan put a five-spot on Gigi’s tray, and she winked at him and blew him a fat, red-lipped kiss over her shoulder as she headed back toward the bar.
“Ethan Cole,” he said into the receiver.
“Well?” asked Red, her husky voice sending blood to his nether regions at once. “Can I count on you to make me happy and the two of us very, very rich?”
Author Notes |
This delightful idea was conceived by Begin Again, who composed the original chapter and asked us all to please contribute, building upon the previous member's plot line. (She'll assign you your chapter number when you PM her.) LJ Butterfly did a fabulous job with chapter #2, so it was fun and easy to build this chapter onto that.
Please join the fun. It's a way to make some FS history together! xoxox |
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Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Ethan Cole: A private investigator and the main character. Ruby Pratt aka the lady in red or Strawberry Shortcake: She is the 28-year-old daughter of Georgina Pratt. Georgina Pratt aka Mama George: A famous jewel thief who is Ruby's mother. She hires Ethan Cole to find her missing jewels. Fefe: Mama George's cream-colored bully dog. Gigi: The bleach blonde, buxom cocktail waitress at Ethan's favorite bar. Joe "Corky" McGonigal: Owner and bartender at Far Away Joe's tavern. Former lover of Ruby Pratt. Tony Ferraro: One of Mama George's bodyguards. |
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Ethan saddled up to the smoke-filled, dimly lit bar and said "I'll have a shot of whiskey. Actually make it a double. It's been one of those days," tapping the sticky polished wood.
The restaurant was full of brown leather crescent-shaped booths, mostly for private, discreet conversations. This was not a place you took Mom for Mother's Day brunch.
"Comin' right up," said Joe, reaching for the Jack Daniel's.
As Joe was pouring the drinks, Ethan, leaning in, said quietly, "I hear we have a mutual friend in common."
"Oh really, who?" as he started to walk back to Ethan, the glass trembling slightly in his hand.
"Strawberry Shortcake." No sooner did the words come out of Ethan's lips did Joe drop the whiskey glass. It shattered everywhere. All eyes were on him.
"It's ok everybody; just butter fingers over here," as he feigned a laugh. People resumed their conversations though tension lingered.
"I'm not thoroughly surprised by your reaction. She has that effect on men," said Ethan. "So, have you all kept in touch since Morocco?"
"Who are you? And how do you know I went to Morocco with her?"
"Who I am is irrelevant right now. Let's just say I had a come-to-Jesus talk with Mama George about some missing jewels she thinks her daughter, Strawberry Shortcake has."
"I don't know anything about that. Not in the business anymore and I don't keep in touch with her anymore. And a word to the wise, you shouldn't either. She's trouble."
"Well, unfortunately trouble is my business."
Not yet convinced Joe is the straight shooter he pretended to be, Ethan pressed on.
"Is there anything you can tell me about her? She's denied taking her mom's jewelry and is paying me twice what her mom's paying if I find them."
"And if you don't?"
"Don't ask."
"Sorry, man. I better get back to work."
"Can you tell me anything that would help?" Ethan asked with desperation creeping into his voice.
"Last I heard she was mixed up with some guy named Vito. Mama George met him once and told him to get out of her house. He owns Chicago's finest restaurant, The Pump Room."
Ethan's instincts flared. He knew he had to find out more about Vito. He was going to call Strawberry Shortcake tomorrow before heading to The Pump Room.
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Author Notes | jmdg1954 (John) was scheduled to write this chapter, but unfortunately, he had an accident and had to have stitches in his finger. He messaged me that he would write another chapter later but for us to continue on. Hoping he heals fast! |
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Author Notes |
Corticobasal Degeneration (CBD) is a rare and progressive neurodegenerative disorder.
CBD affects movement, speech, thinking processes (cognition) and behaviour. There is nerve cell loss and shrinkage in multiple areas of the brain. |
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Contemplating his latest "assignment," Ethan found himself sitting on a park bench overlooking Lake Michigan. His life choices are up for review. His late evening dinner with Vito was somewhat of a surprise, bordering on shock. How in the world did he ever reach this place in life? As a youngster, all he ever wanted to do was crack cases, solve crimes, and be a common, ordinary, everyday, gumshoe.
While reviewing this assignment, he realized he was dealing with a gun maw who owned a pit bull named Fefe. He found himself trolling the streets and bars looking for a redheaded beauty named Strawberry Shortcake. She was the only person he had ever met in his life named after a pastry.
Now, Ethan has found a different variety of thief. He has encountered a lady named Ruby. It is a most fitting label for one who steals rubies and other expensive jewels. As he contemplated this latest encounter, he concluded he was in the wrong business. If he really wanted to get rich, he should be an agent for a baseball player named "Bases." Professional baseball's best base stealers are known to earn significant income. That is a fact familiar to all sports enthusiasts. Perhaps a career as a sports agent would be more fitting and less dangerous. A smaller number are imprisoned. However, some probably are.
Ethan decided that he needs to find the exit door from the PI Bar and Grill. His nocturnal meetings make his work hunting thieves and extortionists dangerous. He also risks injuries like dog bites and gunshot wounds. As he pondered his future, he looked across the park and saw the faint glow of a Waffle House. It occurred to him that a walnut covered waffle would be good in the middle of the night. In addition to that, the employees working at the griddle are only a couple feet away from the customers. Maybe he can enjoy some career counseling while eating the waffle.
He's always been quite skilled at scrambling eggs and frying bacon. Ethan might have a future in the food service industry. It's preferable to daily interactions with crooks. Perhaps a new avocation and job satisfaction are in his future.
The next time I'm enjoying some time on the road I need to settle in for a little supper. I will go to the nearest Waffle House and ask the server," Do you have a chef named Ethan who works here?"
Perhaps he could recount some interesting stories.
Author Notes | Ethan has a career crisis while chasing the crooks. |
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Ethan Cole was going through his own "change of life" controversy. Not medically, but more on the mental aspects of his life. It was all circling in his mind; a drunken abusive father growing up, dropping out of college, career choices and one failed marriage.
Where was the bright side to his life? Where's the happiness? Was there ever going to be a bright side or happiness?
One thing was for certain, though he could take the easy way out, slinging hash in a Waffle House, his passion was putting criminals behind bars. From his early days at the police academy, then joining the force, to grooming and becoming a detective, to now being on his own as a Private Investigator, his greatest joy was the guilty verdict, seeing them in handcuffs and ultimately in orange jumpsuits.
Sitting alone on the park bench overlooking Lake Michigan, he felt calm and serene at least for the time being. Comforting was the sound of the wakes the water made slapping the bulk head and the ripples of moonlight on the water. Surprising to him were the number of couples walking along the lake at 2:30 am. Why? He asked himself.
Satisfied he shook the likes of Vito and his goons for the time being, he decided he needed a cup-a-Joe. He got up, took a cautionary look around just to be sure he wasn't being watched before heading for the Waffle House. Time to stop feeling sorry for his forty-four year old self!
Sittin' in the mornin' sun
I'll be sittin' when the evenin' come
Watching the ships roll in
And then I watch 'em roll away again, yeah
I'm sittin' on the dock of the bay
Watching the tide roll away
I'm just sittin' on the dock of the bay
Wastin' time
"Perfect," he said under his breath as Otis Redding's, On the Dock of the Bay was playing on the Waffle Houses's piped in music.
"Table or counter?" asked the hostess who wore too much eye shadow and lipstick to his liking.
"Counter, thank you," Ethan responded watching her hips and tight butt purposely sway as he followed her.
Just as he sat down, a steaming cup of black coffee appeared in front of him.
"Thanks. I can surely use that."
"Tough night?" asked the grill guy.
Ethan looked at him. Saw his name tag.
"You can say that, Todd."
Todd touched his name tag, happy that someone noticed and gave him the slightest recognition. "What'll you have?"
"Todd," Ethan made sure to use his name. "I'll have a plate of strawberry shortcake waffles, lots of syrup." Why not Ethan thought. He couldn't get this chick or this case out of his mind.
"Coming right up, boss-man."
Ethan looked around. Only two booths were occupied. One had a couple sitting opposite of each other, about his age. They looked miserable. The other booth had a younger couple sitting side by side. Their noses, stuck in their cell phones. Maybe I'm better off alone he thought to himself.
Within minutes a second cup of black coffee appeared along with his plate of freshly cooked waffles. Whipped cream, fresh strawberries and syrup oozing all around it.
"Looks good, Todd. Thanks. You work here long?" Ethan asked needing to have a normal conversation for the first time all evening.
"Yeah, twelve years. All nights. Wife works days, I work nights. It's perfect for our marriage. We hardly see each other."
"Hmph. I guess." Ethan said with a mouthful of waffle. "It's one way to ..."
Suddenly the Waffle House door burst open.
"Cole, you're a dead man!"
"Todd, get out of here," Ethan yelled.
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To be continued by the next writer
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Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Ethan Cole: A private investigator and the main character. Ruby Pratt aka Strawberry Shortcake: She is the 28-year-old daughter of Georgina Pratt. Georgina Pratt aka Mama George: A famous jewel thief who is Ruby's mother. She hires Ethan Cole to find her missing jewels. Gigi: The bleach blonde, buxom cocktail waitress at Ethan's favorite bar. Joe "Corky" McGonigal: Owner and bartender at Far Away Joe's tavern. Former lover of Ruby Pratt. Tony Ferraro: One of Mama George's bodyguards. Vito Torrello: Chicago restaurant owner and brother of Carla Torrello Carla Torrello: Vito's sister. A renowned lounge singer whose jewels were stolen by Mama George 10 years ago. She has been reported missing for a couple of years. Liam McGonigal: Joe's little brother. A would-be thug. With much thanks to Carol (Begin Again) for helping me with the noir style. |
By Begin Again
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Ethan Cole: A private investigator and the main character. Ruby Pratt aka Strawberry Shortcake: She is the 28-year-old daughter of Georgina Pratt. Georgina Pratt aka Mama George: A famous jewel thief who is Ruby's mother. She hires Ethan Cole to find her missing jewels. Gigi: The bleach blonde, buxom cocktail waitress at Ethan's favorite bar. Joe "Corky" McGonigal: Owner and bartender at Far Away Joe's tavern. Former lover of Ruby Pratt. Tony Ferraro: One of Mama George's bodyguards. Vito Torrello: Chicago restaurant owner and brother of Carla Torrello Carla Torrello: Vito's sister. A renowned lounge singer whose jewels were stolen by Mama George 10 years ago. She has been reported missing for a couple of years. Liam McGonigal: Joe's little brother. A would-be thug. |
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When the smoke cleared and Ethan could make out his face he couldn't believe it was no other than former captain of Chicago police department Mickey O'Rourke.
Mickey had been charged with embezzlement and corruption but the FBI never had enough evidence to indict him so Mickey was forced into early retirement. His ties to the Irish mafia, the Mulligan Family ran deep and his loyalties rested with them.
"Nice to see you Ethan, it has been awhile. You were always a good cop. You threw us all a curve ball when you left the force to become a gumshoe. You had just made detective and were climbing the ranks but that's a story for another day. I want to get right down to business as time is of the essence."
Ethan looked curious to hear what was coming next.
"You know the Mulligan family and Tollero family are huge rivals. When they heard of Carla's missing jewels they immediately thought The Mulligan family was somehow involved and they were right. I work for them doing "odd" jobs and so does Shortcake, who happens to be my neice," he continued. "You can imagine the high stakes both Vito and Shortcake faced when they were an item. Anyway, let's stay focused on the here and now."
Ethan was anxious to get to the heart of the matter. "I agree. Let's get to the point. Our history is water way under the bridge."
"Ok, I will tell you what you need to know. Telling you more would just put you in even more danger. Mama George was in love with Seamus Mullligan, head of the Irish Chicago mob. Together, they plotted a scheme to steal jewels from Carla as payback for some unfinished business Vito pulled."
"You're making my head spin. Can you get to the point?" said Ethan lighting up a Lucky Strike.
"Be patient, it's coming," said Mickey irritated and unaccustomed to being interrupted. "Ethan, Shortcake is in danger and while I can tell you she's safe right now, we don't know how long that will last. The thugs that Mama George think are working for her are actually working for Vito."
Ethan let out a long sigh and a puff of smoke. His heart always skipped a beat hearing her name. He had to rescue her from any danger and decide for himself if she's trouble or in trouble.
"Can you take me to her?" Ethan asked with a crinkle in his voice.
"We don't have to go far. Joe, can you do the honors?" he motioned to Joe who is loosely affiliated to the Mulligan family. He is very low level on the food chain and is rarely in the know. He got "connected" while dating Shortcake.
Joe got up and twisted the knob to another door in the room and out emerged the one and only Strawberry Shortcake. Her ginger hair, tousled beautifully, framing her porcelain face and her ruby red lips and sultry green eyes.
Ethan's heart went from an adrenaline rush to cardiac arrest as she was so stunning. He also felt this conflicting edginess and protectiveness at the same time.
"Shortcake, this is Ethan, the PI I told you all about. Now, tell him what you want."
"I remember you," her voice low and raspy-seductive. "I was impressed in Morocco and now that our paths have crossed again I need your expertise and will pay handsomely for it."
"What is it little Miss Shortcake?" unable to hide his curiosity and attraction.
"I want you to kill Vito. It is the only way I know I'll be safe. I double crossed him when we were lovers over the jewels and he wants revenge. Saying yes is you're only option. I want this done immediately and without a trace. What questions do you have for me?"
Author Notes | Hope you enjoy this installment after Steve set up so many possibilities! Look forward to what you think and where it goes next! Lori |
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Author Notes | This is Chapter 15 ...Your are invited to participate by messaging me or we might end it and start another story if anyone is interested. Thanks for having fun with this and I appreciate everyone who joined in. Thank you! |
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