By pome lover
Several people, supposedly picked at random, were winners of an all-paid vacation at a fancy resort. Upon arriving, they realized they were the only guests there. Immediately after their first dinner, they were advised to retire; odd. Even if “tomorrow is a busy day” their off time should be theirs to do as they pleased. This was supposed to be a vacation. Seemed like there were going to be rules.
The morning after their arrival they were informed that their Vegas show girl guest was no longer there. Eve Carlson was missing.
The nervousness of the resort guests was building. Some wanted to leave but they were at the mercy of the hotel for transportation.
Cassidy and Jake, young and adventurous, listened to their fellow guests’ indecision. They knew that Max seemed to be in charge not only of them, but their schedule each day. They wondered what the next day would bring.
At breakfast, Max was all revved up with plans for the day. He told them that down the far end of the beach, when the tide was out, there was a cave that was fun to explore. Several of the guests’ reaction was no, thank you! At first, Max’s reaction was anger, but he quickly acted like he had intended to scare them to see who was brave enough to volunteer to go.
Cassidy and jake said it sounded like fun. “As long as we don’t get lost in there!” Cassidy said.
“Who else will be guides in there?” Jake asked.
Max frowned. “It is my job at this resort to entertain visitors and return them safely to the hotel. I haven’t lost anyone yet.”
“That guy, Max is just plain spooky,” Jake told Cassidy, “and I think he definitely has something to hide. That girl, Eve, was getting close to figuring it out and now she’s missing. Apparently, Eve had remembered him in a situation and persona that he was trying to erase.”
Finally, Mark and Olivia decided to go to kind of keep a protective eye on the younger couple. And Lori decided to show her independence and go without Larry.
Noah decided at the last minute to join them.
They met in the lobby and synchronized their watches. Cell phones wouldn’t work in the cave, so they were left behind. Flashlights were handed out and pocket compasses, and whistles.
Noah spoke up. “I think we need some form of protection. What if, for some reason, we need to protect ourselves?”
“From what?” Max said and laughed.
“Don’t know,” Noah said, “but I like to be prepared.”
Olivia suddenly got the shivers. From you, Max! she thought.
“I don’t want somebody shooting me by mistake,” Max said, so, no weapons.”
“What time does the tide start coming in?’ Mark asked.
“Good question,” Max said, and handed out the tide schedule.
They were ready to go.
By pome lover
Author Notes |
Characters -
Cassidy and Jake - pre-wedding honeymoon Mark and Olivia Stanton - 25th Anniversary Noah Reed - single Eve Carlson - unhappy with a secret Peter Langston - the oldest in the group Lori and Lary Benson Celeste - Concierge Chef Moreau Unknown Host |
By pome lover
While sipping on their wine and contemplating what brought them there, entered a striking man through the sliding glass door from the pool's deck, allowing the cool island breeze to fill the room.
"Hello, I'm Max," his light blonde, almost platinum, hair still damp. You could see a fine physique underneath his robe. "I am your host and imagine Celeste has been making you feel at ease."
Upon his entrance, Eve immediately dropped her glass as she knew Max from her past though she could not immediately remember the connection.
The glass shattered into little pieces on the tile floor in the cocktail area next to where the dining room table was set up.
Everyone seemed fidgety and immediately turned to Eve. "Everything ok, Eve?" asked Max.
"Yes, I'm sorry about that. Just an untimely case of butter fingers," She tried to down play the whole thing. Noah, standing nearby, patted Eve's arm to comfort her.
Eve, who looked like a bombshell if she shed the librarian guise with her proper bun and plain dress. She radiated intelligence and no nonsense with her perfect posture, rimmed glasses and serious expression.
"That's ok," said Max. "I'm sure as details emerge about what we know about each other and me, surprising things will surface," he paused for about 20 seconds. It seemed no one inhaled during this time.
"Lighten up everybody. Just trying to keep you on your toes." He chuckled, yet his piercing blue eyes looking deep into everyone as he surveyed the room conflicted with his light-hearted tone. He flashed a smile showing teeth that were as white as pearls and required more maintenance than Crest White Strips could ever provide.
Max was pretty much physical perfection and he knew it. His charisma and mystique made him attractive to men and women alike.
"Well, we shouldn't keep Chef Moreau waiting. He has prepared a delicious meal for us. The table is set. Look for your place card. You'll notice all partners have been separated. No whispering at this table." Celeste left the room to let the Chef know the guests were ready.
The Chef came in to serve the first course of gazpacho soup and Max decided to brag about Moreau. "Chef Moreau was educated at the finest culinary school in the world, Culinary Institute of America, and has been with me exclusively for the past 15 years."
Moreau was pleasant as he grinned and made pleasantries with the guests, but clearly took his cooking very seriously. Gazpacho, lemon grilled chicken with herbs, a side of Mediterranean quinoa salad and peach sorbet for dessert. Celeste brought out two pitchers of red sangria to pair with the meal.
"In vino veritas, right Max?" said Peter, the older distinguished gentleman, raising his glass.
"Cheers to that!" Everyone clinked glasses. Cassidy shot a nervous look towards Larry, Lori's husband. He returned with intense but brief eye contact.
As Moreau walked back towards the kitchen, he felt compelled to look over his shoulder and when he did he saw Mark, Olivia's husband, slide his hand on Lori's knee.
Max also spotted Mark's hand on Lori's knee and boldly said, "Mark, you may want to use both hands to cut your chicken when it arrives."
"Of course," he shot back nervously, his face as flush as a Macintosh. "I had just dropped a piece of bread in my napkin. This soup is really delicious," he said feigning authenticity and trying to change the subject.
Thankfully for Mark, Chef Moreau came out with a tray of the lemon chicken dishes, distracting everyone from Max's comment.
Only one can imagine what happens next during the second course....
Author Notes | Hope you enjoy this chapter and see the many directions this can go, starting with Ulla and Chapter 3. |
By pome lover
Everyone in the party acted as if nothing had happened, but an uncomfortable silence had descended around the table while the second and main course made its way around the table.
Furtive glances were aimed in Max's direction while they tried to hide their curiosity about who he was and why he was even there. However, when everyone cut into the succulent chicken breast, the deafening silence had become as loud as a thunderclap.
The dynamics that had ruled the table only a few minutes ago had all but gone.
"Anyone would like some real red wine?" Mark suddenly chimed in. "I mean, Sangria is fine as a cocktail, but doesn't sit well with a proper meal, wouldn't you say? Please let me know what you think."
"Absolutely", Max agreed. "Let's get some proper wine and some water to go with it." Without waiting for an answer from the rest of the table, he called the waiter over and placed the order for the drinks.
Once settled with their choice of drinks, another silence descended around the table, while they concentrated on the meal placed in front of them.
Max noticed that Mark's eyes kept on wandering towards Eve, trying to catch her eyes but, apart from that, no further conversation was attempted and no other awkward incident came to pass. It was time to do something about it. But before he could do or say anything, someone else suddenly spoke up.
"Do you know who owns this place?" Peter Langdon asked, the oldest in the group. It sounded more like a statement than a question, but it had the desired effect. Everyone looked up from their plates.
"No, we don't" Noah Reed said as he lifted his wine glass to his mouth. "Or maybe It would be more correct to say that I don't, but I'm sure, Peter, you're about to tell us."
Peter Langdon was a handsome man in his mid seventies. His once dark hair had turned a steely grey which framed a handsome face. His eyes were keen, their colour matching the colour of his hair. Everything about him said he was a man who was used to being in charge. He was also a man who didn't suffer fools lightly.
By now, all the attention was firmly on the two men. "Do you know what all this is about?" Cassidy whispered to Jake
"I have no idea, but I'm sure we're about to find out. I just don't understand how we fit into all of this and why we're even here. I'm beginning to have a bad feeling about it all." He said in a low whisper, hoping not to be overheard.
Lori and Larry, meanwhile, were studying the remains of their chicken pieces as if they were a specimen from another planet. Their discomfort was palpable, something that immediately caught Max's attention.
This was exactly what he wanted. The whole atmosphere around the table had changed from one of curiosity to suspicion and heading towards animosity. Now the game was almost ready to begin. But first there was dessert to be served.
Characters:
Cassidy and Jake
Noah Reed, a business man
Mark Stanton, 25 years married.
Olivia, Mark's wife
Eve Carlton, who is she?
Peter Langston, oldest of the group and retired.
Lori and Larry Benson, in their forties questioning the whole thing.
Max, who is he and why is there? He is blond with piercing blue eyes.
Author Notes |
Noone seems to know who sent the invite to them to go to the Emerald Island, and why they are there.
Please contribute to the story. Chapter 4 is ready to be written. Let Carol, Begin Again, know when you're ready to post. |
By pome lover
The story so far: A group of travelers with seemingly no connection to each other arrive en masse at the beautiful Emerald Isle resort for an all-expense-paid vacation, compliments of an unknown benefactor. Curiosity and giddiness are the overriding feelings initially, but then, at the first dinner party, unease begins to settle in among the vacationers as they realize there is far more at stake here than a fun holiday on someone else’s dime.
Eve Carlson decided she’d had more than enough of the squirming and angst that had befallen the first dinner together in this most glorious of vacation getaway spots. Uncertainty was not going to be the main course here if she had anything to say about it. She was plucky and irrepressible, and she was going to bring everyone in on the fun.
Peach sorbet arrived in wide-mouth crystal stemware, replete with a dessert spoon standing upright in it, like a shovel in a mound of peach-colored snow.
Eve removed her spoon at once and tapped it repeatedly against the bowl of her dessert goblet, filling the room with tinkling, ethereal tones.
“There’s too much tension here,” she announced with a bright smile that brought forth deep, tantalizing dimples to each side of her face. “We can choose to be nervous and ill-at-ease and wary and uncomfortable…OR – and this is what I’m planning to do – we can live it up and make the most of our first meal together here.”
All eyes were gaping in her direction.
“So, okay, I know I’m dressed like a sexy librarian type here, but the truth is that I am actually a Vegas showgirl!” She smiled her gorgeous smile again and let that morsel sink in.
“Max,” she went on, “I knew I recognized you from somewhere when you first entered the room, and now I know where: Five years ago, when I had just arrived at the bus station in Vegas and needed get to the casino for my audition, you offered me a ride in the biggest stretch limo I’d ever seen.”
The entire slate of dinner guests now turned in their seats to take in Max who had begun smiling awkwardly and pulling at the collar of his shirt.
“You looked so different then!” said Eve. “Huge sunglasses, a fur coat, full golden beard and mustache, long golden hair! You were QUITE the sight!”
Nervous laughter peppered the room as Max kept his eyes down and fidgeted with his cuff links.
“But I have a gift for faces and never forget any I’ve ever seen, even when one looks very different from the last time I saw it. In fact, Max, my specialty is recognizing people even after they’ve undergone plastic surgery.”
Tension and angst now began to trickle back into the dining room.
“But I’m getting off track here. I’m going to dedicate this song to you, Max. Hope you like it!”
She unleashed her thick, waist-length hair from its bun, whipped it around in circles twice, then, with practiced ease, stepped out of her stodgy dress to reveal a perfect showgirl figure, enhanced by a lacy black corset, matching panties and thigh-high stockings.
She proceeded to climb onto her chair, then onto the table, stabbed at the face of her phone and tossed off her glasses as the opening chords to “Hey Big Spender” filled up every corner of the room.
All the discomfort that had halted everyone’s pleasure mere moments before now drained from the faces of Eve’s fellow vacationers.
Shirley Bassey’s bawdy vocals lit up the room, and Eve Carlson’s high kicks and sultry hip and pelvic thrusts mesmerized every pair of eyes in the place.
When she finished, the applause and wolf whistles were tumultuous. She smiled and blew kisses and took a huge, cleavage-baring bow as Max ambled over and extended a hand to help her step off the table, onto her chair and then back onto terra firma.
“Wonderful diversion,” he said with a warm smile that belied his ice-cold eyes.
He handed her the now-balled-up librarian dress and pointed her toward the exit sign.
“Everyone, please finish up and retire to your rooms,” said Max. “Tomorrow is going to be a most interesting and eventful day.”
And he was certainly right about that. It began with the announcement by Celeste that Eve Carlson was missing.
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Author Notes |
By pome lover
The morning after their arrival they were informed that their Vegas show girl guest was no longer there. Eve Carlson was missing.
The nervousness of the resort guests was building. Some wanted to leave but they were at the mercy of the hotel for transportation.
Cassidy and Jake, young and adventurous, listened to their fellow guests' indecision. They knew that Max seemed to be in charge not only of them, but their schedule each day. They wondered what the next day would bring.
At breakfast, Max was all revved up with plans for the day. He told them that down the far end of the beach, when the tide was out, there was a cave that was fun to explore. Several of the guests' reaction was no, thank you! At first, Max's reaction was anger, but he quickly acted like he had intended to scare them to see who was brave enough to volunteer to go.
Cassidy and jake said it sounded like fun. "As long as we don't get lost in there!" Cassidy said.
"Who else will be guides in there?" Jake asked.
Max frowned. "It is my job at this resort to entertain visitors and return them safely to the hotel. I haven't lost anyone yet."
"That guy, Max is just plain spooky," Jake told Cassidy, "and I think he definitely has something to hide. That girl, Eve, was getting close to figuring it out and now she's missing. Apparently, Eve had remembered him in a situation and persona that he was trying to erase."
Finally, Mark and Olivia decided to go to kind of keep a protective eye on the younger couple. And Lori decided to show her independence and go without Larry.
Noah decided at the last minute to join them.
They met in the lobby and synchronized their watches. Cell phones wouldn't work in the cave, so they were left behind. Flashlights were handed out and pocket compasses, and whistles.
Noah spoke up. "I think we need some form of protection. What if, for some reason, we need to protect ourselves?"
"From what?" Max said and laughed.
"Don't know," Noah said, "but I like to be prepared."
Olivia suddenly got the shivers. From you, Max! she thought.
"I don't want somebody shooting me by mistake," Max said, so, no weapons."
"What time does the tide start coming in?' Mark asked.
"Good question," Max said, and handed out the tide schedule.
They were ready to go.
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By pome lover
Nine people have been invited to an all-expenses-paid island resort. They are the only guests at the resort. Who invited them? Why were they chosen? What do they have in common? After dinner on their first evening, one person is missing. The following morning, their mysterious host, Max, announced he planned to lead the group on a tour of the cave at the far end of the beach.
The cave didn’t look threatening at all. The group walked across fluffy beige colored sand and stopped in front of a wide entrance that allowed dazzling sunlight to radiate like breathtaking crystal against walls of damp rock formations. Max, holding a battery-operated lantern, stepped forward and gave instructions.
“As we walk through the cave, you will find there are several paths or passages you can follow. Each path culminates in an impenetrable stone wall indicating the end of that particular passage. When you reach the end, turn around and return here to wait for everyone else. If you feel you have lost your way, you all have whistles. Don’t hesitate to use them. If you wish, you can follow me along the most exciting, but challenging and lengthy passage, or you can venture off along other paths which are shorter. You are free to explore as you choose. I hope you all enjoy your venture underground.”
Peter Langston, the oldest in the group asked, “How deep underground does the cave go?”
“I am going to the bottom, which is six hundred feet down and three miles long. A few spots will require you to hold onto a man-made handrail as you negotiate undulating ground going downward.”
With a sense of mystery and adventure, the group carefully walked into the cool temperature and refreshing mild breeze of the cave.
“This doesn’t look frightening at all,” Jake whispered to Cassidy as he took hold of her hand.
“The sand in here is really slippery,” she noted. “I wish I had worn sneakers like you, instead of these open-toe sandals.”
As the group ventured deeper into the cave, the rock walls narrowed, becoming rough and jagged. The air became damp and humid with an earthy, musty smell like stagnant water. In the distance, the sound of dripping water echoed through the atmosphere. Natural light began to fade.
The group proceeded in total silence. “When we turn this corner,” Max said, as he faced the group, “you will enter total darkness. I’m carrying a lantern, but you will need your flashlights. We will travel half a mile beneath beautiful rock formations called stalactites, hanging from the ceiling. We will then have to climb our way through stalagmites rising from the ground and connecting to stalactites, forming columns. Flashlights must be on.”
Olivia, struggling to keep her balance walking over gritty, wet sand and rock, whispered to her husband of twenty-five years, “You realize we are all in a horror movie. We could have been invited to this resort to die.”
With his brow furrowed, Mark put a reassuring arm around his wife’s waist, bending close to her ear. “Stop with your wild imagination. This is an adventure. Let’s try to enjoy this. Plus, it’s free.”
“Mark,” Lori called out in the dark. “Can I walk with you and Olivia? This is becoming a little scary. Since Lary decided not to come, I’m all alone.”
Mark turned around and saw Lori ease her way in front of Noah Reed. He shined his flashlight on her face, smiled, and inadvertently moved the light down her body. She was wearing tight denim shorts and a thin cotton blouse he realized he could see through. With his light focused on her blouse, his lips curved into a cunning smile as he watched her wiggle her way close to him. He thought of the night before when he slid his hand across her knee under the tablecloth during dinner.
Olivia turned around to respond. “Sure, Lori. Please join us.”
Lori quickened her pace and slithered up beside Mark, allowing her chest to brush against his arm.
“Up ahead,” Max stopped and instructed, “are two short passages, each about a half mile long, with very unusual winding rock formations. If you wish, you are free to explore either one of them. However, I’m going to continue to the bottom of the cave. There is a surprise for anyone who follows me.”
“I’ll bet there is,” Olivia whispered to Mark. “There’s probably a pit he pushes us into.”
Annoyed, Mark bent down to whisper in her ear. “I told you to stop your ridiculous comments. We’re here to have fun and enjoy ourselves. In fact, I want to try one of the short passages.”
“No, Mark. It’s better to stay with the guide, even if we don’t trust him. At least he knows what to do in case we run into trouble.”
When they reached the first side passage a beam of light was visible in the distance. “I’m going this way,” Mark announced. “I want to see where the light is coming from.”
“That’s not a good idea, Honey,” Olivia hissed through her teeth. “We need to stay with the guide.”
“I’ll go with you, Mark, if you like,” Lori volunteered, swaying from side-to-side with each word.
“Sure. I would like,” Mark said.
“Mark Stanton,” Olivia barked, but quickly changed her tone to sound calm and sweet. “Would you leave your wife to fend for herself underground?”
“Of course not, Sweetheart,” Mark said as he returned his arm around Olivia’s waist. “We’ll stick with the guide.”
“I’ll go with you, Lori,” Noah said, and they both left the group to explore the passage with the beam of light.
A half hour after Max and the remaining five tourists continued walking, they heard a blood curdling scream echoing through the cave. “What’s that?” Cassidy screamed.
Max casually turned to face the group. “It’s probably Lori. She must have shined her flashlight upward and disturbed the bats.”
“B-B-Bats?” Cassidy stammered, visibly shaking. “Jake, let’s go back. I’m terrified of bats.”
“It’s not much farther,” Max advised. “We’ll all be going back.”
“Jake, please,” Cassidy insisted. “Please Jake. Let’s turn around. My feet hurt in these sandals.”
“Okay, Babe. We’ll go back.”
Mark and Olivia Stanton, along with Peter Langston continued to follow Max, as Lori’s continuous screams grew more distant. Within fifteen minutes, the group was standing at the bottom of the cave, 600 feet below ground level. They were standing in a large 20 by 20 foot open space with a 10 foot high ceiling. “This, my friends,” said Max, “is called a Dead Pit Room.”
“Noooo!” shrieked Olivia, her eyes stretched in fear.
Ignoring her, Max continued. “That means this area was naturally formed with no passages extending beyond this point. Caves have a variety of names for types of natural open spaces. Now, as promised, I have a surprise for you. You will not be climbing 600 feet back up to the cave opening.”
“I knew it,” Olivia snarled. “Mark, I told you we wouldn’t leave this cave alive. You wouldn’t listen.”
“Madam, please,” Max said, his nostrils flaring with contempt in his eyes. “If you follow me around this bend, there is an elevator.”
When the group exited the elevator, Max led them to the front of the cave. “You three may go back to the hotel while I go back into the cave to find the four guests still scurrying around.”
When the Stantons and Peter Langston reached the hotel, the concierge, Celeste, ran outside to meet them. Almost breathless, she said, “Lary Benson is missing. The chef prepared lunch for him, but he was nowhere to be found.”
Author Notes |
This chapter is part of a book created by our own Begin Again (Carol). Did Max find Cassidy and Jake, or Lori who left the group with Noah Reed? Was the scream heard throughout the cave as a result of Lori's fear of bats? Where is Eve? What happened to Lary Benson?
If you have answers to any of these mysteries, contact Carol to write Chapter 7. |
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