General Poetry posted November 6, 2020


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5/6/5 Senryu

Atticus

by Gypsy Blue Rose


This senryu is about my grandson, Atticus


everyone he meets

is a potential good friend —

loving Atticus


 


 



Senryu You! writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 Senryu dedicated to a person, place or thing. Here's a chance for you to praise your favorite food, or honor a loved one! Have fun!


My grandson, Atticus, is a very loving and friendly little man. He greets everyone with a joyful "Hello friend!" We would live in a better world if adults were more like children.
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"I have come only to speak of love. To me, nothing in the world is as precious as a genuine smile from a child. " Rumi
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"Let the little children come to me, and do not hinder them, for the kingdom of God belongs to such as these." Jesus Christ, Luke 18:16
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"Your children are not your children.
They are the sons and daughters of Life's longing for itself.
They come through you but not from you,
And though they are with you yet they belong not to you.
You may give them your love but not your thoughts,
For they have their own thoughts.
You may house their bodies but not their souls,
For their souls dwell in the house of tomorrow, which you cannot visit, not even in your dreams.
You may strive to be like them but seek not to make them like you.
For life goes not backward nor tarries with yesterday.
You are the bows from which your children as living arrows are sent forth.
The archer sees the mark upon the path of the infinite, and He bends you with His might that His arrows may go swift and far.
Let your bending in the archer's hand be for gladness;
For even as He loves the arrow that flies, so He loves also the bow that is stable." -- Kahlil Gibran, author of The Prophet
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Senryu is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three lines of five, seven, and five syllables OR LESS. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references some aspect of human nature or emotions. They possess no references to the natural world and thus stand out from nature/seasonal haiku.

Thank you for reading me :) Have a wonderful weekend,



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