General Poetry posted April 1, 2021


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Sometimes Broken

by Boogienights

Sometimes I get so angry
at how broken I've become.
Both my knees are bone on bone,
no longer can I run.

People I see, my age, walk
so briskly down the street.
I wonder why I'm so impaired,
unsteady on my feet.

Sometimes I curse at God,
it's wrong, I know that in my heart.
But often pain will take ahold,
and cause my tears to start.

It's then I look to place the blame,
though many are worse off.
But spend an hour in my place,
you'll understand, not scoff.

sometimes I hate myself so much,
it makes me want to scream.
I'd like to wake up in the past,
and find this was a dream.

I'm selfish, for I know I'm loved,
needed by my family.
But sometimes I wish it would end,
I know that's wrong of me.

But those like me would understand
just how it is to live,
trapped in a broken body
that has nothing more to give.



Feelings Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Emotions have overcome us all at one time or another. It could be from someone that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Write a poem that expresses feelings and emotions such as anger or depression. Any type of poem is welcomed.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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