| General Non-Fiction posted August 11, 2021 |
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Such a precious memory
An unforgettable moment
by jenintorre
I remember '69.
That little face
so like mine.
I'd longed for this day
my whole life through
to hold my child,
so perfect, so new.
The love I felt,
hard to explain.
Worth every bit
of anxiety and pain.
I just stared and stared
At my precious boy
feeling such
overwhelming joy.
This beautiful child
that I'd always longed for
was now in my arms
I could never want more.
I vowed to protect
this little one
forever until my days
were done.
I was so happy,
thankful and glad.
This was the best moment
I'd ever had.
I Remember writing prompt entry
I remember '69.
That little face
so like mine.
I'd longed for this day
my whole life through
to hold my child,
so perfect, so new.
The love I felt,
hard to explain.
Worth every bit
of anxiety and pain.
I just stared and stared
At my precious boy
feeling such
overwhelming joy.
This beautiful child
that I'd always longed for
was now in my arms
I could never want more.
I vowed to protect
this little one
forever until my days
were done.
I was so happy,
thankful and glad.
This was the best moment
I'd ever had.
That little face
so like mine.
I'd longed for this day
my whole life through
to hold my child,
so perfect, so new.
The love I felt,
hard to explain.
Worth every bit
of anxiety and pain.
I just stared and stared
At my precious boy
feeling such
overwhelming joy.
This beautiful child
that I'd always longed for
was now in my arms
I could never want more.
I vowed to protect
this little one
forever until my days
were done.
I was so happy,
thankful and glad.
This was the best moment
I'd ever had.
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Writing Prompt Begin your non-fiction autobiographical story or poem with the words 'I remember...' Complete the sentence conveying a moment, an object, a feeling, etc. This does not have to be a profound memory, but should allow readers insight into your feelings, observations and/or thoughts. Use at least 100, but not more than 1,000 words. The count should be stated in your author notes. |
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