| General Fiction posted December 18, 2022 |
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Two guys in a bar discussing disappearances from the factory
Disappearances Theory
by SLMorrical
"Hey, Sal over here."
"Hi, Doug! Thanks for suggesting we get a drink tonight. It has been tough at work with all the deaths and disappearances."
"I know Sal. I've been at Corps for 10 going on 11 years, and there has never been a death on the line, nor less a disappearance."
"Well, I think it's been real hard on Ben Framer. He just became CEO."
"Taking his father's place must be very stressful. I wonder why Gary Farmer did that. I thought it was going to be the younger son Joe. Ben went to college to be a lawyer, not a CEO."
"I know Sal. I thought Ben didn't want the company."
"Ben doesn't want the company as far as I know. I wonder if it has anything to do with Donna's disappearance. You do know that Ben was seeing Donna for the last three months."
"No! I didn't know that. I thought she was seeing Charlie."
"She was until Charlie disappeared three months ago."
"Wait a minute. I just thought of something that might help solve the disappearances."
"What Doug?"
"Everyone that has disappeared, Ben either was seeing or had a friendship with. We need to notify the police about this Sal."
"Okay! Let's go."
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"Hey, Sal over here."
"Hi, Doug! Thanks for suggesting we get a drink tonight. It has been tough at work with all the deaths and disappearances."
"I know Sal. I've been at Corps for 10 going on 11 years, and there has never been a death on the line, nor less a disappearance."
"Well, I think it's been real hard on Ben Framer. He just became CEO."
"Taking his father's place must be very stressful. I wonder why Gary Farmer did that. I thought it was going to be the younger son Joe. Ben went to college to be a lawyer, not a CEO."
"I know Sal. I thought Ben didn't want the company."
"Ben doesn't want the company as far as I know. I wonder if it has anything to do with Donna's disappearance. You do know that Ben was seeing Donna for the last three months."
"No! I didn't know that. I thought she was seeing Charlie."
"She was until Charlie disappeared three months ago."
"Wait a minute. I just thought of something that might help solve the disappearances."
"What Doug?"
"Everyone that has disappeared, Ben either was seeing or had a friendship with. We need to notify the police about this Sal."
"Okay! Let's go."
"Hi, Doug! Thanks for suggesting we get a drink tonight. It has been tough at work with all the deaths and disappearances."
"I know Sal. I've been at Corps for 10 going on 11 years, and there has never been a death on the line, nor less a disappearance."
"Well, I think it's been real hard on Ben Framer. He just became CEO."
"Taking his father's place must be very stressful. I wonder why Gary Farmer did that. I thought it was going to be the younger son Joe. Ben went to college to be a lawyer, not a CEO."
"I know Sal. I thought Ben didn't want the company."
"Ben doesn't want the company as far as I know. I wonder if it has anything to do with Donna's disappearance. You do know that Ben was seeing Donna for the last three months."
"No! I didn't know that. I thought she was seeing Charlie."
"She was until Charlie disappeared three months ago."
"Wait a minute. I just thought of something that might help solve the disappearances."
"What Doug?"
"Everyone that has disappeared, Ben either was seeing or had a friendship with. We need to notify the police about this Sal."
"Okay! Let's go."
This is the first time I have done something like this. It is a little our of my comfort zone on writing, but I believe to be a good writer I need to try and write many genre. Just like nursing, I have to find my niche. I appreciate any feedback, all kinds are welcome. This sire has helped me so much with my writing. Thank you for reading.
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