General Poetry posted January 15, 2023


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Free verse poem

Little Caribbean Queen

by CrystieCookie999

Above these mossy tendrils
on a slender, pliant branch
Caribbean reinita sways,
content to sing alone,
while coquis chirp
like birds themselves,
until the night
has washed out with the tide.

This brown reinita sings of all
the sounds that salsa missed:
the echo of a flower world,
a distant, pounding waterfall,
green darkness just below
the lushest ferns.

So small and shy,
Latina nightingale.
Her song careens off
palm tree trunks
and fills the misty air
with essence of Caribbean,
a gently sung desire,
the warmest of the whitest sands,
a world unstroked by human hands,
a Puerto Rican, Spanish lullaby.


 



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Art attributed to Barry Kent Mackay. His bird art has definitely picked up where John James Audubon left off. This poem was written over 20 years ago, but winter brings out the desire to revisit the Caribbean.
Reinita - Official bird of Puerto Rico. related to the nightingale. Also called reina mora. I once held a female reinita on my finger. Reinita means 'little queen.'
Coquis = small tree frogs who sing a perfect seventh interval. They got their name because some Spanish speakers thought their song sounded like they were saying "koh-kee." Although Puerto Ricans used to claim that the frogs would only survive in Puerto Rico, I have found sources that indicate they also now live in Hawaii and California, and possibly other places as well.

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