General Poetry posted January 22, 2023


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potlatch entry Roger's Refrain

Pink and Blue

by dragonpoet

Flames flicker in red and blue
Skin returns to healthy pink hue
You know now that it is true
You can't control skin's red and blue

You fight within your tangled mind
For a way you're able to find
Way Mother Nature can be kind
So to untwist your tangled mind

Maybe if we'd take better care
For what she's caused to be right there
For all of us to tend and share
And for us to take better care

If we'd worked together we'd see
A safer world for you and me




Rules
any number of mono-rhyme quatrains ending with a rhyming couplet.
end of line one and end of line four in each quatrain is the same
8 syllables per line.
Iambic meter

Club entry for the "~ Roger's Refrain ~ week of 1-14-2023 ~" event in "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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