General Poetry posted January 23, 2023


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haiku

haiku (Bird of Paradise)

by Val Crisson

Bird of Paradise
sways in late summer breeze
never to take wing



Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry


As the contest entry states, a strict 5/7/5 syllable count is not necessary. Therefore my middle line is 6 syllables, haiku needs to be 17 syllables or LESS. It should read short/long/short
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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