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Parable of the 10 virgins ( Matthew 25 )
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The Surprise

by Sarah Probe S.

Cultural Exchange Contest Winner 

Cinderella was educated and of a great family’s history, 

she was meant to be a princess, but was reduced to modern slavery, 

as soon as her father passed away, she was reduced to poverty.

She however made sure she kept her faith alive, 

the Holy Spirit had kept her wisdom intact, 

her heart remained pure despite all of the obstacles,

As part of an evil plot, her foolish wicked step-sisters Anastasia & Drizella, were belittling, bullying her and to fulfil a princess dream was against all odds, due to the ambushes and the fact she was in an endless routine of evil’s organised work, slandered and even ensnared, persistently....

Evil ugly men were also persecuting her, goblins as well as wizards like Jafar, plotting hard to compete against the groom-to-be Prince of peace, whom they suspected had chosen Cinderella in marriage.

Her competitors wanted to own what she had left: her wisdom, her intellectual property, and her inner beautiful soul, that was compared to a saint oil placed inside the lantern of her spirit: it’s light on light that illuminates her, and that light, the shiniest star of them all, would enlighten her path to the door of the kingdom of heaven, where her groom, the Prince of Peace, is to be awaiting,

Awaiting there for a very short time at the door of the end of the valley of the shadow of death, he would then close the doors of his Kingdom, disowning all other brides who had come to meet him.

( * ) And at midnight there was a cry made, Behold ! the bridegroom cometh !”

So ready at all times, Cinderella, endlessly patient was waiting and hoping, keeping her soul alive, enlightening her candles,

(**) “The bridegroom was a long time in coming, and they all became drowsy and fell asleep….”

Except Cinderella.

(***) "go ye out to meet him !"

Anastasia and Drizella awoke, but too busy organising evil plots against Cinderella, they had completely forgotten about buying oil for their own lanterns, and asked Cinderella for some of hers, that she had precautionary saved for her lamp,  for her survival….

She ignored them and left them behind, 

After a while they eventually made their way to the  Kingdom’s door, ta the end of the valley of the shadow of death, saying “Lord, Lord, open to us”

(****) " But he answered and said, Verily I say unto you, I know you not “

And the door of the Kingdom was shut.

(*****) " Therefore keep watch, because you do not know the day or the hour "

This is how Cinderella the princess of heaven, was chosen as Cinderella,

the bride of Christ,

her soul shining like the brightest star,

like a lamp that never runs out of oil, the light of faith,

that illuminates the universe.



Writing Prompt



Insert one or more Disney characters into a Bible (or other religious or mythological) story. Reference any relevant films and Bible (or other religious text) verses in your notes so readers can follow along.

Prose, 400 words minimum.

Cultural Exchange
Contest Winner


(*) ( Matthew 25-8 )
(**) ( Matthew 25-5 )
(***) Matthew ( St James Version 25 - 8 )
(****) ( Matthew SJV 25-12 )
(*****) ( Matthew 25-13 )
474 words
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