Family Poetry posted January 17, 2025


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A braided vacation poem

Jump

by Jewell Hermann

We walk thru humid air, lush greenery on either side 

 

In a place different, my brother and I walked thru 

city new, bundled up, for exploring is the goal 

 

Tropical tree leaves lure eyes upward

catching thru our corneas wonderful 

Varied wavelengths of light 

 

After many steps on snow strewn sidewalk 

We stepped into Des Moines history museum,  

warmth a relief to the face 

Wonderful wealth of history, fascinating to the mind

 

Our eyes explore the vast flora feast, as do others strolling too 

over stone paths and arched wooden walking bridge and 

up rough cut stone stairs to a view grand, garden sprawls out

 

After getting snacks at Mexican Grocery store we go by 

State capitol grand, for green and gold domes, crown it

Beside it, we traipsed thru snow to see up close, a monument tall and appreciate

statues and words carved for Union soldiers and sailors 

 

Sun having set long ago we make, way to our temporary home 

past people enjoying food and bartender serving up libation  

 

As we made our way back to the sidewalk I had an idea! to jump the road verge, snow piled high

I landed with a knee to the concrete, surprisingly making a hole thru both pants and base layer 

My brother looked on disapprovingly, snow caked to his shoes

       

As we exit the event, glass doors swing shut behind us, I wish I 

could stay, soak in the warmth and write this, but no 

Into the dark we go, having explored a conservatory and more

                         

Gloves put on or hands shoved in pockets, hat and 

hoods pulled down against the cold, 

We go down sidewalk, more than foot high snow flanking

Try? I won't, to jump another snow bank today.




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