Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 28, 2018


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Sandbox

by michaelcahill





                 I doubt any of my school chums
have THIS MUCH SAND
I imagine I could build
                       a city out of it
                                if I had the time
            or maybe a tropical island hideaway
                                if the ocean decided to finally
                   arrive

 
~~~~~


I remember when the ocean wasn't out there
                                           at the end of the sand
               or maybe I didn't notice it
 
I notice it now
               and it calls to me
the sand has its appeal
        but vastness and mystery

                          well …


 
~~~~~


sometimes I wonder if there ever was
a strip of sand to walk on
                   at the end of the ocean
I'm sure my memory is clear
I wasn't born here at sea
 

 
~~~~~
 

the horizon is thrilling now
           for something pierces it
                     something familiar  

something safe


 
~~~~~


there is sand everywhere
but still the ocean attacks
              as though it plans to recapture me
I retreat from the greedy hands of the water
                                         as they grasp at me
 
I hear the ocean cursing at me
for what, I cannot say
          and it's accusations are but whispers
                     as it retreats to regroup its assault
 
I know I'm safe now
surrounded by sand
far from the sea I once foolishly
                                      breached
 
I wonder why I would ever enter
                              such a dangerous place


 
~~~~~


the sand surrounds me but there is
                                                little room

I stare out
just looking
something was out there once
I know that


 
~~~~~
 

the space is small and confining
me and a small bit of sand
                            nowhere to go
          no reason to be


 
~~~~~


I once had school chums

                                     I wonder ...




 



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