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One Thousand Cranes
: Dusk Kisses Peonies by Gypsy Blue Rose
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dusk kisses peonies

with the last light of day —

tucked in for the night


 

Author Notes
Peonies are plants or shrubs that have large, showy flowers. It's the state flower of Indiana. Most peonies thrive in cold climates.

Contemporary Haiku: has one to four lines, 17 syllables or LESS. No rhymes. Alliteration and metaphor are okay. The essence of haiku is the juxtaposition of two images or ideas separated by a dash or ellipsis (~ .... ) Images are taken from human nature or nature.

the haiku foundation.org
source: Modern Haiku.org

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Gypsy

     

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