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Raising Young One's
Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2
: Old Man's Hope by QC Poet
Minute contest entry

Once in a while act like a kid
Young one's reason
Why that I did,
Silly Season's!

Watching them grow up fast
Bright and witty,
Aging ~ some pass
Life's a pity.

Now aging try to understand
How time flies by,
A helpful old hand?
In their growth ~ Sigh!



 

 


Author Notes
Old Man's Hope
7/12/2021
By; George Martinez
(A.K.A) Chochee Medina / QC Poet

Raising Young Ones

Notes;
Nowadays I wondered what my kind of example to the kids growing around me I have and will be?

A traditional Minute Poem has 12 lines total. It has 60 syllables. It is written in a strict iambic meter. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff.

In this poem contest it is not required the only requirement is the strict syllable count.

See Rules for the Non-Traditional Example; Humanity's Questions - written by Gabriella 2

     

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