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One Thousand Cranes
: The Last Light of Day by Gypsy Blue Rose
5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry



the last light of day 

drenches golden blades of wheat —

obscured miracle 


 

Author Notes
Obscure miracle as in a beautiful sunset in a dark night or as in not seen by human eyes but still beautiful.

5/7/5 poem is similar to haiku but has different rules. 5/7/5 poem's rules are simple: syllables count and grammatically connected lines.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

     

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