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Such a precious memory
An unforgettable moment by jenintorre
I Remember writing prompt entry
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I remember '69.
That little face
so like mine.
I'd longed for this day
my whole life through
to hold my child,
so perfect, so new.

The love I felt,
hard to explain.
Worth every bit
of anxiety and pain.

I just stared and stared
At my precious boy
feeling such
overwhelming joy.

This beautiful child
that I'd always longed for
was now in my arms
I could never want more.

I vowed to protect
this little one
forever until my days
were done.

I was so happy,
thankful and glad.
This was the best moment
I'd ever had.


Writing Prompt
Begin your non-fiction autobiographical story or poem with the words 'I remember...' Complete the sentence conveying a moment, an object, a feeling, etc. This does not have to be a profound memory, but should allow readers insight into your feelings, observations and/or thoughts. Use at least 100, but not more than 1,000 words. The count should be stated in your author notes.

Author Notes
Poem 101 words.

     

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