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A Potlatch Club Octelle
Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
: Trusting your Senses by JLR

Between my eyes sits my sniffer
that helps me tell that things differ.
Hearing that which smelled fishy
which turned my tummy squishy.
causing my taste buds to drool
proving twice I was the fool!
Between my eyes sits my sniffer
that helps me tell that things differ.

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Author Notes
Octelle
The Octelle, created by Emily Romano, is a poem consisting of eight lines using personification and symbolism in a telling manner.
*The syllable count for this verse is 8/8/7/7/7/7/8/8
*the rhyme scheme is A1A2bbccA1A2.
The first two lines and the last two lines are identical (refrain).

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