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Double Refrain Kyrielle
Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
: Recess by JLR

Big clouds amass above the peaks
amid the trees, the air is cool.
Class days are winding down this week
watch them cavort around the school.

Clouds creep, hiding the sun's hot rays
amid the trees the air is cool.
Recess goes long this last full day,
watch them cavort around the school.

Nine boys at play, the girls away
amid the trees the air is cool.
It is bo-peep the girls all play
Watch them cavort around the school.

Fields are awash with wildflowers
amid the trees the air is cool.
Play winds down while counting the hours,
watch them cavort around the school.

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Author Notes
A Picture this club entry in a Double Refrain Kyrielle
* stanzaic, any number of quatrains is written at the discretion of the poet.
* syllabic, each line is 8 syllables.
In English, it is often written in iambic tetrameter.
* written with 2 refrains.
* rhymed, aB1aB2 cB1cB2 dB1dB2 etc., B1 and B2 are rhymed refrains.

For the more youthful reader; bo-peep is a game for very young children, in which one hides (esp hiding one's face in one's hands) and reappears suddenly.

     

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