Exceptional Tanka Suite Tanka Collection : ~Tangled up in Blue~ by Gypsy Blue Rose

Intoxicating  roses in a vase of dreams  tangled up in blue —       as I lie here alone        daydreaming of you  Faraway,  the sound of your pounding heart   is a lighthouse        that guides me out of the dark        and into your arms   Recognized Author Notes Syllables count is 31 OR LESS= 5/7/5/6/5 & 3/7/4/7/5 TANKA is a romantic Japanese poetic form that originated in the Japanese Imperial Court, where men and women engaged in courtship would exchange tanka. The form was created 1,200 years ago. Like haiku, it's written in a succinct manner in 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS in a short/long/short/long/long format because Japanese and English syllables are different. Personification, metaphor, simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. click here if you want to see tanka rules -- click here if you want to see modern tanka examples -- click here if you want to read free online tanka book -- click here to read Tanka Society of America Ã?¢?? click here to read Masterpiece Classes Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -- Atticus 'Tangled up in blue' is a Bob Dylan song, no relation to the poem, I just liked the phrase Painting by Ikenaga Yasunari

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