couple of observations though.
The last two lines both have ten syllables, they should only have nine. And the last sentence, (a) doesn't match the tense of (knots). Reviewed with blinders on.
crazy
lazy
hazy
glazy
filled wild heart, crazy, lazy thought,
memory still hazy, glazy knot.
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Write a six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables.
The first four lines rhyme or near rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.
For example:
Myself by Marion Gibson
Sowing
Hoeing
Growing
Mowing
Planting gardens, sowing, hoeing grounds.
Sunshine keeps all growing, mowing mounds.
Example 2:
Rhymetender by Yancy Lee Dalton
Minor
Kinder
Finer
Rhymer
Caretaker of minor, kinder rhymes.
Tender heart of finer, rhymer times
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Author Notes
Write a six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables.
The first four lines rhyme or near rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.
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