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12/5 Poem
One Thousand Cranes
: The Pillow by Gypsy Blue Rose


little girl cries herself to sleep on mom’s pillow —
after funeral


 

Author Notes
12/5 POEM - a new form created by Gypsy Blue Rose. The poem is inspired by Japanese poetry. In the first line (12 syllables) write a visual phrase about nature or human nature. In the second line (5 syllables) write a juxtaposition pivotal phrase in relation to the first line. You may write one stanza of 12/5 alone or repeat as many times as you like.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason.- Novalis

     

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