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3/5/3 Words Lune for the Japanese Poetry Club
One Thousand Cranes
: Croissants and Coffee by Gypsy Blue Rose
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                croissants and coffee
at the cafe in Madrid —
                   waning morning moon





 


 

Author Notes
MADRID is the capital of Spain, where I grew up. CAFE is a coffeeshop

LUNE is a short poem with three lines, similar to haiku in that it uses imagery and succinct composition but has no other rules. Lune poetry originated when American poets noticed that writing a haiku in English isn't the same as writing one in the Japanese 5/7/5 syllables mold. American poet, Robert Kelly, created the lune in the 1960s. The SYLLABLES LUNE consists of 5/3/5 syllables. There is a variant lune created by poet Jack Collom. His form is also a self-contained tercet, but his poem is WORDS LUNE (not syllable-based) and has the structure of 3 words in the first line, 5 words in the second line and 3 words in the final line. click here if you want to read more


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Gypsy

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