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3/8/4 Haiku (Ekphrastic)
One Thousand Cranes
: Swan Love by Gypsy Blue Rose
For Rules, Please Read My Author Notes

 
 
swan love
in summer, winter, spring, and fall ~
seasoned lovers
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
Swans mate for life

Ekphrastic is a poem inspired by a picture or painting

HAIKU is an unrhymed Japanese poem. It uses a juxtaposition of two images in a way that prompts the reader to make an insightful connection between the two. It alludes to a season of the year. The haiku is written from an observer's point of view. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) BUT in English is 17 syllables OR LESS. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. use a dash before the satori (usually the last line). Avoid alliteration, metaphor, personification, and capital letters (proper names are okay).
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click here to read Haiku Society of America, HAIKU EXAMPLES
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click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES
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click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

pictures from google public domain



     

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