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8/8/8/8 Four Line Poem
One Thousand Cranes
: Drizzle Covered Grave by Gypsy Blue Rose
Dedicated to Helen (Lyenochka)

 
 
 
by her dad's drizzle covered grave,

crisp ripples of wild winter wind

dance with the tousled white-mist hair

and in her umber eyes ...  thunder
 
 
 

Author Notes
Four Lines poems have eight syllables in each line. I like to connect them grammaticaly and mine never rhyme.

Thank you very much for your time and kind review,

Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver and Graphic Artist

     

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