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Poetry ~ amphibrach meter
Forgive by Sugarray77
Forgiveness Poem writing prompt entry

Whenever forgiveness is hardest to fathom
and tender emotions are never allowed,
you'll find that your good thoughts will also be hardened,
you'll always be living beneath a black cloud.
 
But, when you release your dark feelings, permitting
a healing to enter ~ the pain to depart,
no matter that someone remains undeserving,
it pulls the sharp knife from your own crusty heart.

 


Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any type with the topic of forgiveness.

Author Notes
Painting by Elena Kotliarker

Amphibrach meter ~ a unstressed, stressed, unstressed pattern.

     

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