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Tanka Collection
: Yesterday Child by Gypsy Blue Rose
for rules and information, please check my author notes

 
 

sweet yesterday child

hides in toasted wheat fields

to keep innocence safe

away from dark dirty hands ~

bound in chains of shame
 
 



 

Author Notes
Tanka is one of the oldest types of Japanese poetry.

Tanka in Japan, is 31 syllables in a 5/7/5/7/7 form, but in English is 31 syllables OR LESS format.

For examples click here

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Gypsy Sensei

     

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