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haiku (Bird of Paradise) by Val Crisson
Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry
Artwork by avmurray at FanArtReview.com

Bird of Paradise
sways in late summer breeze
never to take wing

Author Notes
As the contest entry states, a strict 5/7/5 syllable count is not necessary. Therefore my middle line is 6 syllables, haiku needs to be 17 syllables or LESS. It should read short/long/short

     

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