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Octelle poem for the club challenge
Growing with Nature by kahpot
Artwork by avmurray at FanArtReview.com

 
 
when rose buds bloom I view my skill
as learning hands hold thorny quill

planting seeds in unkempt ground
part the dirt for beauty found

finding life in nature's depth
hands dig deep, though quite inept

when rose buds bloom, I view my skill
as learning hands hold thorny quill
 
 

Author Notes
The Octelle, is a poem consisting of 8 lines using personification and symbolism in a telling manner.

The syllable count for this verse is 8, 8, 7, 7, 7, 7, 8, 8,

The rhyme scheme is aa/bb/cc/aa.

The first two lines and the last two lines are identical. :


Thank Jan for leading this club
Thank you avmurray for the artwork

     

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