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Choka Poem 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7
One Thousand Cranes
: Across Golden Shores by Gypsy Blue Rose
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Just to hear your name
 
makes my unruly heart run

across golden shores

by the cooling amber sun —

imagination

carries me across the sky

amidst brilliant stars

chasing the day's dying dusk
 
dancing 'neath the peeking moon
 
 
 
 

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Author Notes
CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine-lines in a 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated. Originally, CHOKA was written in 100 sets. It was composed mainly to commemorate life events. for examples and more information from the Poets Collective CLICK HERE

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Gypsy

     

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