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Choka Poem 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7
One Thousand Cranes
: - Surrender - by Gypsy Blue Rose
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Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of sexual content.

 

pinned against the wall    

      with trembling arms ‘bove her head   

      and heavy breathing 

he kisses her pretty neck

      and gives gentle bites

she surrenders completely   

      trusting he loves her 

and after so many years 

      she still is his sexy wife  

 

 

Author Notes
CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine-lines in a 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated. Originally, CHOKA was written in 100 sets. It was composed mainly to commemorate life events. for examples and more information from the Poets Collective CLICK HERE

     

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