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Kojiki 5/7/5 5/7/5 7/7/7 for Japanese Poetry Club
One Thousand Cranes
: Delicious Sweet Lips by Gypsy Blue Rose
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delicious sweet lips
made for my delight each day
with ravenous crave

lost in your blue eyes
I seek my reason to live
slaved to your desires

your warm touch makes me insane
I can't get enough of it
I know I'm made to love you
 
 

Author Notes
The Kojiki is divided into three parts: upper 5/7/5 - middle 5/7/5 - lower 7/7/7 syllables count. it uses a kigo (one seasonal reference: winter, summer, spring, or autumn). You may tell a real part of our history, a personal story, or a fictional story. Keep it simple. HISTORY of KOJIKI It's the oldest poetic form that dates back to the year 712. It's a compilation of poetic history and mythology passed on by mouth from generation to generation in the 8th century before written Japanese existed.

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

     

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