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Gogyohka Poem
One Thousand Cranes
: I will Follow you by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
I got the news today

your soul will take flight in a day or two

 and I'm not prepared —

but when death comes, you won't be alone,

I'll follow you to your eternal home
 
 
 

Author Notes
This is just a poem, I don't promote suicide for lovers when one dies. I am from Spain, and we are very dramatic people and it reflects in our poetry.

GOGYOHKA is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

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