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Five Senses Poem
One Thousand Cranes
: As the Day Dims by Gypsy Blue Rose
A New Form I Created - poem in my author notes too

 
 
I want to caress your laughter
and feel the sunshine of your soul
enveloped tightly in our love

Giggling and running by the shore
with cool sea breeze upon our backs
encouraging wind guides the steps

Sun dims and we gather our things
tucking in our passionate yearnings
midst mangos, oysters, and red wine



 
 

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Author Notes
Five-Senses Poem has to cover all the senses (sight, touch, smell, taste, and hearing) It's written in 3 lines stanzas with 8 syllables in each line. You may write as many stanzas as you like. It may be rhymed or free-verse. It's based on Japanese poetry composition.



I want to caress your laughter
and feel the sunshine of your soul
enveloped tightly in our love

Giggling and running by the shore
with cool sea breeze upon our backs
encouraging wind guides the steps

Sun dims and we gather our things
tucking in our passionate yearnings
midst mangos, oysters, and red wine

Thank you for reviewing my poem :)

Gypsy

     

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