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Crescendo Poem 6/7/8/9/10/11/12/13
One Thousand Cranes
: Shiver and Shudder by Gypsy Blue Rose
Sexual connotationbut not crude / poem in black font in author notes

 
 
your body next to mine
makes me shiver and shudder
with feelings growing deep inside

as steam rises higher and higher
and lava ejects from the crater's throat
thus the swelling passion cannot be contained

our love overflows over valleys and rivers
your body next to mine makes me  shiver and shudder
 
 
 
 

 

Author Notes
I created this new form I call a 'Crescendo Poem' with a syllable count of 6/7/8/9/10/11/12/13. Use personification of something in nature and how it relates to a human experience. Any theme. Free Verse or rhymed.
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POEM WITH BLACK FONT

your body next to mine
makes me shiver and shudder
with feelings growing deep inside
as steam rises higher and higher
and lava ejects from the crater throat
thus the swelling passion cannot be contained
our love overflows over valleys and rivers
your body next to mine makes me shiver and shudder
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- Crescendo a steady increase in force or intensity

- Throat is the highest point and entrance of a volcano where it ejects lava.

- Before a volcanic eruption: earthquakes, steam, hot ground, and swelling of the ground surface.

- When volcanoes erupt they spew hot gasses, ash, lava, and rock that can cause disastrous loss of life and property. click here if you want to read more -- click here if you want to read more

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Gypsy

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