FanStory.com - Rookie Writer Awakeningby Deniz22
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From Aspiration to Exasperation
Rookie Writer Awakening by Deniz22
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Let me tell you a tale of a FanStory newbie,

Heart all aglow with the writer’s fame to be!

His first FanStory essay must be impeccable,

Word perfect, pure, sweet; Ah, delectable!

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He worked, wrote, sweated, deleted, repeated,

All night long, he labored, pacing, now seated.
The dawn found him exhausted, yet ecstatic,
Copy and paste on FanStory: fame automatic!

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Alas and alack, by the response taken aback!

The prose was perfect, not the work of a hack.

Why these two, three star, bad skimpy reviews?

FanStoryians know the problem; it’s not new$.

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