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Somonka Poem
2024 Japanese Poetry
: ~ I Love You ~ by Gypsy Blue Rose
first stanza is the woman's poem, the second is the man's response


I love you,

your touch ignites

   a fire inside—

in remembrance of last night

I daydreamed all-day
 


I love you,

    you bring out the best in me—

I yearn to be

with you tonight to show you

how much you turn me on
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
The Somonka, is a Japanese verse of two unrhymed poems (5/7/5/7/7 - 5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS exchanged between lovers in a statement and response form. The earliest Somonkas can be found as far back as the 1st century AD. click here, if you like, for more information ; . click here if you want to read more

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem.

Gypsy

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