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Sometimes there is regret that comes with a right decision.
Ballad of the Broken Hearted by locust
Emotions Poetry Contest contest entry

I want to cry a little bit 

and I know exactly why. 

I cannot help but feel adrift 

when in my bones do lie 

the sore regret of bitter choice 

made by none but I. 

 

There is  a lovely irony 

that comes when the sky is blue. 

A clearness in the atmosphere 

which is not felt in you. 

And yet we find our soul defined 

by its mockng hue. 

 

In hearts exist an oddly grief 

put there by spurned potential. 

The effort put to vocalize, 

not inconsequential. 

That which tides did put asunder 

I still hold as deferential. 


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Author Notes
I believe the emotion here is sadness. Overwhelming and profound sadness triggered by grief, guilt, and regret. Sometimes a story ends and it leaves you with emptiness. It's okay to sit in that emptiness and contemplate how good it used to be.

     

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