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100 flash fiction contest entry
2024 Japanese Poetry
: Out of the Mouth of Babes by Gypsy Blue Rose
100 Word Flash Fiction contest entry

Another afternoon at the park with my grandson, Atticus. I watch him run faster than all the other kids and it makes me smile.  He is a little below the average height for his age but has a large spirit and a big heart. When he ends the race, he comes over to me and proudly tells me, “Being small doesn’t mean I can’t be fast.”  Ah, “Out of the mouths of babes.”. He is kind and plays with all kids, regardless of their size, abilities, age, or race. 

 

falcon flies fast

over the highest mountains

with grand soul wings 

 

 

Author Notes
Word count: 100 *help with grammar is welcome*

The peregrine falcon is the fastest member of the animal kingdom, with a diving speed of over 190 mph (300 km)

"Out of the mouths of babes" is an idiom that originates from the Bible, Psalms 8:2. This phrase highlights how sometimes profound, wise, or surprising statements can come from children.


100-word flash fiction in Haibun style. It's a Japanese poetic form that combines prose and haiku. The prose is flash fiction with 100 to 130 words plus one haiku at the beginning or the end. The haiku relates to the story without repeating but relating to the story and moving it forward for a deeper meaning.

Almost all of Japanese poetry is free verse.

Thank you very much for reading my flash fiction story.

Gypsy

The picture is of me with my newborn grandson, Atticus. I have taken care of him since he was born.

     

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