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A Lune Poem 5-3-5
Raindrops by kahpot
Lune Poetry Contest contest entry
Artwork by seshadri_sreenivasan at FanArtReview.com

 
 
raindrops always fall

yet ascend

to the clouds above
 
 

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Author Notes
Write a Lune for this poetry contest. It is a simple and fun form of poetry to write. It has 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the second line and 5 syllable in the final line. Rhymes are fine but not required. The subject matter is open.
Example:
trees never wander (5 syllables)
but still spread (3 syllables)
across open fields (5 syllables)

Thank you seshadri_sreenivasan for the artwork
No matter how many times we fall
someone will always love us

     

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