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A Nanni Poem
Her Eyes by Mark Jackson
Naani poetry writing prompt entry
Artwork by Susan F. M. T. at FanArtReview.com

 

a black wall of cloud
develops in her eyes
too late to check
our inevitable storm.

 


Writing Prompt
A naani consists of 4 lines, the total lines consist of 20 to 25 syllables.

Example:

A dialogue
When lengthens
Remain questions
Without answer as criticism.

Author Notes
Naani is one of Indian's most popular Telugu poems. Naani means an expression of one and all. It consists of 4 lines, the total lines consists of 20 to 25 syllables. The poem is not bounded to a particular subject. Generally it depends upon human relations and current statements. This poetry was introduced by one of the renowned Telugu poets Dr. N.Gopi, presently working as vice-chancellor to Telugu University, Andhra Pradesh. (Shadow Poetry)
This was inspired by reading his work.

     

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