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Ekphrastic Gogyohka Poem
2024 Japanese Poetry
: The Final Line by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

beautiful girl

I’m thirsty for your attention

   and when you pass by—

my heart races 

to the final line

 

 

Author Notes
Ekphrastic means a poem inspired by a picture

Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

pictures from my Pinterest account

     

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