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Yamato Uta Poem
2024 Japanese Poetry
: Dark Golden Sun in His Eyes by Gypsy Blue Rose

He smiles

and I see myself 

on the dark golden sun

in His eyes

His laughter

waters barren fields

with multicolored rainbows

and fruitful flowers

His infinite love for all

never ceases

especially the most wounded 

broken people

God loves and is loved 

and He will never be forgotten

He lives in our hearts


Author Notes
Inspired by the New Testament and the Book of Longings by Sue Monk Kidd

Yamato uta is an unrhymed free verse type of Japanese poetry. Free verse means there are no rules, the poem is not rhymed and it can be as long as you like. It was created by poets during the Heian Period 700 century. As with all Japanese poetry, keep it as succinct as possible with word imagery, easy to visualize. Most are about nature but you can use any subject you like. "Yamato-uta is composed of the many words born from people's hearts, as leaves grow from seeds". �?�  The people use these words dexterously to express their thoughts about what they see or hear." wikipedia

thank you for reading and reviewing my poem,

Gypsy

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