FanStory.com - Magnificentby Barry Penfold
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Youth, Imagination and Energy. A winning combination.
Magnificent by Barry Penfold
75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry
Artwork by VMarguarite at FanArtReview.com

The stick moved easily through the cleared soil pad. My mind had the picture and my body ached with the build. Three days and done. How good it looked.

The test would tell the real story. Helmet on, leg over, bum nicely settled on the seat. Off I go.
Down the hump and to the left. A straight stretch allows me to move fast to another corner. Wow.
How good is my bike track?

MAGNIFICENT.

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Author Notes
Your youth should be a time of exploration, imagination and building. A time of magnificence.

     

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