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: The Window to my Soul by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
with heavy-heart

I feel the pale-tempered dawn

rise as the moonlight falls



I drown deeply

in the pain of loving you

from a distance



I get lost in our forests

of my evergreens

and your mountain pines



aurora lights

carry nostalgic seeds

blooming in my eyes
 
 
 
 

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Author Notes
Inspired by Spanish Poet, Federico Garcia Lorca.

SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo). Classical senryu was humorous and sarcastic. With time, it has developed into a loser form with any theme.
the haiku foundation senryu rules

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Gypsy

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