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Strained relationship between father and daughter
Jane by Mia Twysted
Loop Poetry Contest contest entry
Artwork by Linda Bickston at FanArtReview.com

Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of violence.
The man was Joe
Joe Mckenny liked to play
Play some games with the hot woman, Jane
Jane Smoot likes her pills
 
Pills she traded for some blow
Blow out the candles on her birthday
Birthday, another her father missed again
Again, he'd never come of his own free will
 
Will found Jane's father living on the down-low
Low was this man cacked in decay
Decay, whittled down by his use of cocaine
Cocaine offered him some he was ready to spill
 
Spill his secrets like a singer on the radio
Radio waves couldn't save Jane's Dad that Thursday
Thursday, Jane her dad she did slay
Slay, his skull she'll keep to remember the kill

Author Notes
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