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Ekphrastic Modern Haiku (rules in author notes)
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Presentation and poem by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/4/24

 
sweet slumber

    neath a golden moon —

dreaming to be

the light in your eyes
 
 
 
 
 

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Author Notes
4 lines and 17 syllables modern haiku; ekphrastic means poem is inspired by a picture or painting

Modern Haiku The most common literary adaptation in English of haiku looks something like this: one to four lines, no strict syllable count but brief, and often with a long/short or short/long asymmetry. These poems too utilize a caesura. Images need not be taken from nature, though they may be and often are. Seasonality is optional, though often featured. Here's an example:

in the woodpile
the broken ax handle
haiku foundation modern haiku rules


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Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. Presentation and poem by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/4/24

     

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