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a tanka
Day and Night by AlvinTEthington
Tanka Poetry contest entry
see author's comments for form's description

He separates the
Dome of Heaven from the Seas;
He is the LORD God.
His greater light rules the day;
His lesser light rules the night.


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Author Notes
In a five line tanka, the middle line should serve as a pivot. It should form a haiku-like poem with the two lines before and another poem with the two lines after it. It should be 31 syllables or less.

     

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