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150 words of misunderstandings....
Flash Fiction
: Who Surprised Who? by Begin Again
100 Word Story writing prompt entry












Panic gripped me.

After three years, I assumed James shared my fantasy. We'd talked of growing old together. Over a candlelight dinner, I surprised him.

"I'm pregnant."

Red wine spewed across the table. I collapsed in inconsolable tears.

The next morning, he sent flowers, apologizing.

Still stinging, I sent him a single black rose. My note suggested he rot in hell. I wasn't a desperate woman.

He sent an engraved invitation. 'Please meet me tonight at 222 Landon Lane."

My heart melted.


Outside the house, my spirits wavered.

Opening the door, I froze. Black linen draped the furniture. A skeleton dangled nearby.

Was this a sick joke?

Hysterical, I raced outside, barreling into James.

"Honey, what are you doing?"

"I got the message!" I whined.

"What? ... Last year's haunted house?" Laughing, James pointed at the house next door.

A pink arrow made of wood read, Will you marry me?


Writing Prompt
Write a story that is between 100 and 150 words. The trick is you must use the following words: black - single - fantasy - wood - pink - arrow - joke - heart - desperate - whine. Words may be used in different formats (for example: joke, jokes or joking)

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Author Notes
Write a story that is between 100 and 150 words. The trick is you must use the following words: black - single - fantasy - wood - pink - arrow - joke - heart - desperate - whine. Words may be used in different formats (for example: joke, jokes or joking)

Thank you KiwiRawles for the artwork.

Word Count - 150

     

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