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Quatrain
Little Poems
: These old Bones by Treischel
Quatrain Poetry Contest contest entry

These Old Bones



Oh how these old bones creak!
There's distinct possibility
Of declining agility.
I guess that's not unique.



Author Notes
Went out golfing 18 holes in the heat. Can't hit the ball as far as I used to. The aches this morning, I think I need traction!

This is a single Quatrain with abba rhyming (enveloping). The syllable count is 6/8/8/6.

Thank you for the artwork, Aging together by camera68 of FanArt Review.com

     

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