Ah!
Am struck by a thunderbolt of pleasure.
As it runs through me, my hairs stand on their roots
A look of expectancy, visible on my face
Ah! I am in a state of frenzy
And comprehension is beyond me
As the charge "earths" itself through my body...
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Author Notes
The context of the poem is centered around the experience of orgasm, capturing the physical, emotional, and psychological aspects of this moment of intense pleasure. The poem does not provide specific details about the who, what, where, and when but instead focuses on the universal and visceral nature of the experience. The why of the poem is to explore and express the overwhelming sensations and emotions accompanying the moment of climax.
The language in the poem is vivid and intense, using words like "thunderbolt," "frenzy," and "charge" to convey the powerful nature of the experience. Using the word "earth" as a verb to describe the sensation grounding itself in the body adds depth to the language.
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